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  1. ... me to, but I walked to the window in time to see a car smash into Carrie s car. ... hit by a drunk driver. ANYWAY enough of me. I think she should see it; she would never be...

    6 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 26/11/2008

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  3. ... through his tiny apartment window . From afar, he could barely distinguish a figure at the very top of the building. Squinting...closet, quickly throwing on a light blue hoody and white creased t-shirt...

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  4. ... herself, or even better have her in the backseat of the car completely unharmed. Good work! I am not good at ...

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  5. Is this a summary of your short story, or the story itself? If it is the story...quot;Jon could feel"- other times it is present (almost stream of consciousness)-"Jon wakes". If the latter is what...

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  6. WOW! that is brilliant! it's really good! i really like your style of writing but you might have to proof read your story. i also like the twist at the end. over all, a FANTASTIC story!

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  7. Wow, this is actually really good. It's full of great words, that keeps the reader hooked, it's easy to understand...

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  8. ... him, disapproval clear in golden flecks of my brown-green eyes." It would be like... looked up at the board with my beautiful blue eyes." It sounds funny and it ...

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  9. ...'t know what to focus on. Simpler is better a lot of the time. Keep writing! Hope I helped!

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