It's good and well written, although some of the wording is a little cliche. For example, I've heard many different variations of the line 'icy shards that pierced her skin'.
3 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 25/05/2012
yes, there is
1 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 29/03/2012
I like this piece of writing a lot because it has mystery, action, fear, passion, love all bound up in one neat package. There are three things I would point out. One; it would be very difficult to decapitate someone swiftly with a knife. Two; you start a...
4 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 05/04/2012