Sadly, it just sits there for me; I make no connection with it
1 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 13/09/2009
good poem! very beautiful! i personally don't enjoy repetition in my choice of words, but that could just be me. i suggest reading it over again to make sure it flows as nice as you want it to. i find i stumble a little here and there when i read it out loud. i like the last stanza because it...
7 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 25/06/2009
I loved it. To me it was beautiful, i especially loved the end I rise up with the morning sun I witness this glorious thing I fall, I fall upon my knees before the Son What glories to us, shall...
4 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 24/06/2009
"Only the Good Die Young" by Billy Joel. It's more to lure a Catholic girl away from her chastity, but it's a similar idea, love now before we get old/die.
1 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 16/06/2009
His hard work has allowed you to lead a life of leisure. He toils so you don;t have to, so you should be grateful and thank him for his sacrifices
1 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 06/05/2009