Yes I liked it! Although it's not really a poem though is it? Here are some ideas for titles: Alive and alone The lonely man Stories in the end Withering Someday
2 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 03/03/2012
It's amazing!! I just LOVE the way you go into such detail about the emotion despair. Just one small correction: on the last line it's you're, not your. and for the 2nd paragraph last line, I think "wishing for objects too far to clench"...
4 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 31/01/2012
Gold I want gold ...so you have an innie?
10 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 11/06/2011