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  1. Be aware that a prologue is rarely good for a novel and almost never for a short story. You don't have the word count to fool around with leading the reader into it. It's got a fair number of minor punctuation goofs. Good word selection overall, some good visual...

    2 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 23/09/2009

  2. Absolutely worthwhile effort. I agree about the beginning (before symptoms) needing a bit of editing - but once Nana becomes ill - your pen gains momentum and power. I would be honored to read more and help if...

    5 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 04/01/2011

  3. Well, I hate to disappoint, but I really have no criticisms of the writing style, I mean, halfway through I was so engaged I forgot I was looking for things to comment on, and trust me...

    2 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 09/04/2010

  4. If the family are werewolves why doesn't the little sister just attack the vampire back? And she is already a werewolf, why would she think she is turning into a vampire, if anything she would turn into some hybrid thing. And on the first day of school she just...

    4 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 06/09/2013

  5. I thought it was really good, and really really interesting! I don't understand why her dog is her only companion, but i'm sure you're going to explain that later on. I also don't get her "only companion"...

    3 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 03/01/2010

  6. If this was a story about something else other than a dog, I would like it (= .. there's just this thing with me and animals i just dnt like lol . sry! it's pretty good though, i liked the part where you said my eyes begged to cry ... whatta nice touch =)

    5 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 20/12/2009

  7. I really like the story..I think it needs a smidgen more detail, like what she was doing before this happened. Expand on a lot of points, I think. It needs to flow better. I really hope you finish it and publish it...

    10 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 29/06/2010

  8. Oh my God! you are amazing, I really would like to read this book if you publish it!!! You have inspired me... Keep writing^_^

    9 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 27/06/2010

  9. It's a bit... factual and kinda boring, sorry. I wrote a scene kinda like that a week ago, my character is looking our the window at 6 in the morning, commenting on how the rain looks to herself, then about how her family usually...

    2 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 31/12/2012

  10. The Giver

    1 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 09/09/2013

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