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  1. This is not really a short little poem - perhaps in inches - but you see, you need line breaks. Butst this up - make every line compact and a little jewel. You have the material, now break it right.

    1 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 26/09/2012

  2. Loved it! With an engaging theme and rhythm, it brilliantly combines everyday speech and poetic skills. The image of the teacup is exactly right. Worth several readings: joy!

    2 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 22/02/2012

  3. ... has hurt everyone here on some level, mostly through lying and unwarranted attacks, and you don't want to come out and say that you speak...

    7 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 30/08/2011

  4. ...incompleteness) is also a little clever. But overall the rhythm is monotonous and the word choice is nothing special...no images really make an impression. Like I said, it is quite a fair...

    2 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 27/11/2011

  5. thoughts, like birds caught in the oil spillage.

    12 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 25/07/2009

  6. I never knew hot chocolate could be so beautiful... I really love the poem... Now I wish I had a campfire, someone playing a guitar, and a lot of hot cocoa...

    3 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 25/07/2008

  7. ... rhymes sound forced and very childish. The whole swirl swoosh and twirl bit also sounds childish. If you would make it sound more "...

    4 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 22/12/2007

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