... rhymes sound forced and very childish. The whole swirl swoosh and twirl bit also sounds childish. If you would make it sound more "...
4 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 22/12/2007
Was it a UK fighter? I think you may mean Ross Pearson. Image and bio attached. He has tats on both shoulders. His left is a black tribal " twirl swirl thing".
3 Answers · Sports · 30/06/2009
thoughts, like birds caught in the oil spillage.
12 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 25/07/2009
...incompleteness) is also a little clever. But overall the rhythm is monotonous and the word choice is nothing special...no images really make an impression. Like I said, it is quite a fair...
2 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 27/11/2011
...out with one layer (first image ) that is a main black color and the dots and twirls are brushes that... of dots and swirls . Overtop is a new...
1 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 02/10/2007
... has hurt everyone here on some level, mostly through lying and unwarranted attacks, and you don't want to come out and say that you speak...
7 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 30/08/2011
Loved it! With an engaging theme and rhythm, it brilliantly combines everyday speech and poetic skills. The image of the teacup is exactly right. Worth several readings: joy!
2 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 22/02/2012
...com/paintshop-pro-tutorials/258- twirls ./ http://www.createblog.com/paintshop-pro...paintshop-pro-tutorials/14-abstract- swirl / What you should do is...you want to put the effect around, copy it and paste it onto a new layer....so the swirls ...
1 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 16/06/2009
This is not really a short little poem - perhaps in inches - but you see, you need line breaks. Butst this up - make every line compact and a little jewel. You have the material, now break it right.
1 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 26/09/2012
I love the poem.It's absolutely great. I hope you keep writing.
1 Answers · Family & Relationships · 25/01/2009