My, what harsh winters you have, my dear. All the better to freeze you with, eh? Nicely done little ramble through winter. Every morning shortly before dawn I watch Orion's belt south of me this time...
1 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 01/09/2009
Adam it is very sweet and very descriptive. you know i love it. lol :)
5 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 08/07/2009
Extremley beautifull poem,theres nothing wrong with being mushy,you are expressing your love through your writting,and thats fantastic,i admire you.Anne.
16 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 05/06/2009
... a bad birthday card verse. Hasn't got any similes in it. Hasn't really got any imagery aside from asking you to think of a rose. It doesn't do any of the work of conjuring up mental pictures for you that a poem's ...
3 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 05/01/2009
I think I shall stand close to you, In your thin filmy gown. And wrap my ... stop your little frown. I'll squash the bug and hold you tight, And kiss you on the ear. ...
11 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 16/12/2008
First things that come to mind: 1. A long, dark road to the grave. 2. A golden bird rising through clouds.
2 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 25/10/2008