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  1. ... and dragons. At his funeral the mourners ask what they will do now when they ...a dawn attack 'we will feel our spears morning -cold in our hands' - but there will be no one...

    1 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 25/04/2016

  2. Your writing will become much better when you replace these words with your own originality

    2 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 07/02/2014

  3. Believable only because it is so pathetic.

    4 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 16/08/2013

  4. The first sentence doesn't make sense. Creative, yes, but overly descriptive. Re-read and cut it down a bit. Subtle is best.

    4 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 15/07/2013

  5. ... few niggles below: The black limousine, glistening in the early morning summer light, pulled into the driveway, as the neighborhood went on with ...

    2 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 27/03/2013

  6. ...or why they stopped happening, in the same way that early morning mist evaporates as the sun comes... the truth of the matter, and were swayed by Atticus defence, and ...

    1 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 04/03/2013

  7. If this is a thriller book you need to read more Thrillers, the opening to Thrillers are not flowery or this slow moving...

    5 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 21/02/2013

  8. It works. The only real issue is the opening paragraph. You know, it's ... don't know. No, actually I do know. It's the run-on sentences. They mess up the rhythm of the text, and since you...

    1 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 21/02/2013

  9. good ! but i would prefer more of short dialogues than descriptions . reading long descriptions makes me sleepy & close book as a reader

    2 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 10/02/2013

  10. Maybe there is no ghost, it's just a member of the family or a friend taking it too far. Then, when this is ...

    2 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 19/01/2013

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