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  1. .... I've used "blazing morning sun" myself a few times just to get a... did this. I did that," in the first couple of paragraphs, so it's...

    6 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 17/06/2010

  2. ...bedroom, you don't look around and note everything you see. -I have to agree that in the beginning, your character sounds pretty mature. I got...

    3 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 03/12/2011

  3. definitely hooked me in on the first couple sentences and seems interesting enough. Just be careful to avoid the corny writing that usually comes from writing about secret bases and stuff.

    4 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 25/08/2011

  4. ...until she hears screams and finds the people from the camp in the middle of a wood. Also: "He slipped his arm under...

    3 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 09/11/2017

  5. I think that its awesome so far keep writing! You are very descriptive and it makes it easy and natural for the reader to picture exactly what's going on :) I hope u will continue

    3 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 26/11/2012

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