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  1. Yes. When you shift POV, always start with the character whose POV you're recounting... For example... "Steve looked around the room nervously anticipating his meeting with Charles. His...

    1 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 08/03/2015

  2. Your sentence structure is poor. You seem to have no concept of capitalization or punctuation, and the story is gross. I believe this is what is considered, a shitty story.

    2 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 09/01/2012

  3. LOL OKAY SORRY I BUT I LAUGHED OUT LOUD WHEN I READ YOUR STORY. erhm, anyways, it's okay. it makes me wonder what's gonna happen next, but you should work more on...

    2 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 09/01/2012

  4. Well your spelling is a bit off. The word would be 'jotting' information down, not 'jolting.' Same with 'I stood there' not 'their.' Two things to avoid would be starting...

    4 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 01/04/2013

  5. Hi:) so iv'e just read this, and it's just a bit hard to understand!! I guess its just the fact that I dont know anything about your book at ALL! I'd love to read it!:) If you want my total advise email me at bozsoccerbabe3@gmail.com. I'd be happy to...

    1 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 24/07/2012

  6. Is that it? i think it's pretty good ;)

    3 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 12/12/2008

  7. "Journey to the End of the Night" and "Death on Credit" by Louis-Ferdinand Celine "Hard-Boiled Wonderland and the End of the World" and "Kafka on...

    2 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 13/02/2016

  8. The film script was completely different. PLEASE read all the way to the end before viewing the films. The films are some of the best eye-candy ever done, but the male characters were all given much...

    5 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 08/01/2013

  9. i usually dont like poetry, but i liked yours.

    4 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 03/12/2007

  10. Honestly After reading the first three paragraphs I just skimmed the rest of it because it is so sparse. I would put it as. The heavy doors swung open and standing at the doorway was a small man...

    3 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 09/06/2010

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