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  1. Er... mate sorry, the attachment won't zoom in, I can't read the text. I read over the text above. It's pretty good. I usually don't read stories in the first person, but your's is interesting. The...

    1 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 28/06/2014

  2. ...quot; not "ghosted." "The tiny, lifelike porcelain figure swayed blankly to the music, arms outstretched, as though reaching for...

    3 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 11/06/2014

  3. ...much. I would change it to, "He hummed, with his body swaying to the loud cadenzas in the second movement." Of course this...

    6 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 09/06/2014

  4. ... in the gentle breeze that caused her long brown hair to sway. Michael looked up at her from where he laid in the...

    3 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 06/06/2014

  5. ... his equal. Also, he allowed himself to be swayed by madness. His overall personality is wicked with lust for power and if you...

    3 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 26/04/2014

  6. Try combining a few sentences. Other than that its actually pretty good. I like how you describe bits and pieces rather than elaborating on the whole scene. You voice could use a little more power but other than that its awesome...

    3 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 31/03/2014

  7. ... Dancing Heart Rhythmic Heartbeat Swaying For Number One

    7 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 04/04/2014

  8. It definitely makes me curious to know more. Why wouldn't the baby stop crying? What exactly was the certain end? Why? Who was with Edwin? All that just in two paragraphs.

    5 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 17/03/2014

  9. ... wrong with you analyzing his evilness. The more sway we give darkness in our lives, the less room we have for ourselves...

    1 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 08/03/2014

  10. *Edit* In this sentence: Which effectively juxtaposes Captain von Trapp’s masculine vocals (most notably in “Edelweiss”) and Elsa Shreader’s alto range. Change the word, "Which" to "...

    2 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 07/03/2014

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