Really like it. Very crisp imagery. I enjoy that dark, soul-crushing hopelessness. It is reality.
3 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 17/06/2013
...of course confused. I'm usually not interested in a poem, lyrics , etc. unless they're confusing. The more confusing art...
6 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 21/07/2011
you are a very talented poet. my advice to u is find a group of friends with a band and start writing poems(songs) for them for money. if u look at all song lyrics normally they sound just like a poem
6 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 02/07/2010