I enjoyed. The last two lines of the first stanza coupled with the last two on the last would make a poem on their own. My compliments. Now where have you been hiding?
11 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 16/09/2008
Wow! I'm absolutely speechless . Amazingly written :) honestly, one of the best narrative poems I've read in a while. Very descriptive, I was completely enthralled from beginning to end. A bittersweet...
2 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 23/03/2013
I like the plot, but the meter sounded a little bouncy in some places. S1 L4, for example "he could not hide" seems like it would be smoother as "he couldn't hide." To me, this seemed like a bit of cowboy poetry. That...
4 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 28/01/2011
o my gawd...this was terrific, truly a splendid egg (or good if u like good better) Yes I love poems that tell a story, instead of just mushy gushy hullabaloo But wow, this takes it to a whole nother level, Great story Nicely concluded...
4 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 18/08/2012
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