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  1. ...resemblance between us gave way to a nickname: ??) ‘ Lil Christopher’. I hated that more... continued walking. Trish ceased her questioning and followed...

    2 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 02/08/2009

  2. i wouldn't switch anything around . its very good and very lyrical. smooth and witty

    1 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 29/01/2009

  3. the purpose of the party is to suppress individualism and original thought. (i didn't read that passage because it made my eyes hurt, but i have read the book.)

    2 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 27/05/2009

  4. It's not bad, but there's lots of grammar errors which I fixed for you: Dad did it again. He used his god given authority to force us into accompanying him on his so called '...

    6 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 29/06/2009

  5. Did your cat just vomit up that random mess and you thought you'd publish it to get someone else's opinion? Cat vomit is cat vomit is cat vomit. Wipe it up and go away.

    4 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 22/12/2010

  6. Very nice. Healthy balance of dialogue and suspense, expert use of detail to describe the scene in its looks, sounds, and smells. I particularly enjoyed the wild-eyed man's speech, you captured the accent nicely. I think...

    3 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 25/06/2011

  7. That seems very good for your age. I'm not sure what to say to help you improve it, but I have found the advice at this site very helpful - http://www.holtuncensored.com/hu/the-ten-mistakes/ After reading it I go through everything I...

    3 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 21/06/2011

  8. I like it! I think its very good actually, it all makes sense and I definitely want to read more! If there is something I would criticize is that the phrase my blood ran cold is cliched and it would enhance that sentence if you could come up with...

    3 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 20/06/2011

  9. Wow ur very smart and u have the mind to definitely be a writer. It would of killed me to set down long enough to write a little story like that. I couldn't of done it!

    6 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 01/07/2011

  10. Wow, I liked it a lot! it caught my attention! With more Development and things like that it will be a very good book! You are very talented!

    5 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 20/06/2011

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