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  1. ... or Yanita Ziyir or Zinn Guy names : Abel or Adin Bonysten or Beck Coffer...

    4 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 22/10/2012

  2. Well, I'm going to be totally honest here. I cringed just reading about your characters. "Tohbee" (Toby?) sounds like the most stereotypical character ever. Oh, and of course the "quiet one" would be nerdy...

    6 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 20/09/2012

  3. .... You also shouldn t use the person s full name in just the first sentence. Maybe instead of that...down the street with a drink in hand, ready for his son s baseball game. Say how he disappeared or what ...

    3 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 13/09/2008

  4. I like Carla best with the short, blonde hair and blue eyes, but if you do that, I think it should be like a page-boy cut or whatever its called.( A feminie boy cut). And I THINK Dawn's description matches her...

    3 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 08/08/2011

  5. I like simple titles best. No more than three words. Has more of a dramatic hook. Something like: Tomboy. or Sammy B. Something like that. Hope this helps

    2 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 10/12/2009

  6. I think you have much more to work with if you choose plot 2. You get to explore their first reactions, them meeting and learning about each other, and the awkwardness of being alone with a person you only met a few hours ago. Ps. I...

    6 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 05/07/2009

  7. It was great. It really was. I love your style of writing, it's great. There would only be one change, and it's the last you'd expect: cut out the "besides my sister" part in the first sentence. It just doesn't work lol...

    6 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 28/07/2011

  8. You need to do a LOT of editing. Reading through that whole paragraph was a real chore. Your story doesn't flow, it's just a bunch of statements/sentences which are short and choppy - use more punctuation like commas, semi...

    3 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 07/01/2009

  9. "The sorrow of the unimaginative author"?

    8 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 14/12/2009

  10. ...would be a very interesting story. i love how u used College names for the names of the Characters, that's a neat idea. This...

    1 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 01/07/2009

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