...suicide and ronald becomes very angrey when he finds out about debbie and eli so he goes driving drunk and gets into a major car accident...
3 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 20/06/2011
-Noon With Mr. Baron -The Ingenious Mr. Baron -Our Neighbor Mr. Baron -So I Imagine -I Can Only Imagine...
6 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 14/08/2011
...quot; http://www.amazon.com/Compound-S-Bodeen/dp/0312578601 Eli , the 15-year-old son of a billionaire techno-preneur, has spent the last six ...
3 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 07/12/2010
... cut, as with a sword. On the other side, a scene out of Hell; a man nailed to a farmhouse door, his wife and daughter Iying screaming in muck at the center of a ring of attentive...
5 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 16/07/2013
...think it's a good plot so far, but Debbie would be attracted to Eli because of his youth, so I wouldn't advise you to make it seem like...
2 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 24/06/2011
...true of many publishers. If she is being seductive toward Eli without ever being physical is a different thing. Her being...
7 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 19/06/2011
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3 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 05/04/2014
...like affairs and drug use but really focuses on the descent of one man into betrayal, addiction, etc. I'd focus a bit more on this character and ...
2 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 19/06/2011
It's ok. As someone else said, standing in the rain tends to be rather boring. I think you could edit this down a LOT and make it much sharper and more interesting for the reader.
3 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 22/09/2013
I think it sounds very interesting, and you have a lot of potential to develop fascinating characters here. I personally think plots are quite important, but writing style is the most important. It sounds like you have a...
4 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 18/06/2011
