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  1. Then, through other mirrors, the girl is able to communicate with the boy and plead with him to help her get home. So the boy...

    3 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 03/08/2010

  2. ... wiped it again and it rippled more. She set the product and the rag down and tried to touch the mirror, but her hand went into it with ripples around her wrist. I like the work ripple...

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  3. i like the part where they are all fighting over the ice cream. but why is the prologue so soon? other than that and a few grammatical mistakes i thought it was good. it would be cool to build off of it.

    1 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 27/11/2008

  4. Hey! I'm the author LOL. thanks so much for your comments:) By the way, this isn't the whole first chapter so far:) x.

    3 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 06/04/2010

  5. Try not to use exclamation marks or caps in your writing... and elaborate a little more on reactions/actions/feelings/expressions of characters. That s all but I think it s pretty nice!

    3 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 04/12/2008

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