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  1. First of all, amethysts are purple, often a deep purple. the most common blue gemstones are sapphire (a deep blue) or aquamarine...

    5 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 04/10/2008

  2. You have a knack for weaving the right words together. I, overall, am extremely impressed...

    2 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 21/06/2010

  3. I know you said it's for your friend to read, I couldn't help being nosey. If you have any more of this story I'd be happy to put it on my website www.writers-novels.webs.com I think you're very talented by the way :) I...

    1 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 03/09/2009

  4. ... (The creature's movement reminds [him/me] of a wave )...etc. Good, steady pacing but, again, it stops the story to sight...

    6 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 14/06/2013

  5. It's got the spirit but the body is a little awkward. :) - A couple of typos, misspellings, and grammar flaws. Run it through a spell-checker and read it through a couple of times to polish a piece. Some syntax, like extra commas and...

    3 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 27/02/2010

  6. Hey I don't think you suck at all, that was interesting, and you have good description, but I think you can work on these: - You change tenses throughout this. In the first paragraph it's past tense (I THREW, I RAN...

    4 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 19/02/2010

  7. Well, there's good news and bad news to go with this. Bad news: there's a whole lot of bad stuff going on here. Good news: it's not at all hard to fix; it'll just take a bit of time. First off, you're going to want a stronger hook than getting dressed...

    5 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 19/02/2010

  8. It's a good story. You are a good writer. But you are very straightforward with your writing. It's like you are just telling the audience exactly what happens. You need to be more descriptive. Show them...

    6 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 16/05/2010

  9. 1. you can check your grammar and punctuation :) 2. Nothing to cleanse here either. "Nothing to clean here, either." 3. She still couldn't get over the horrific accident even after four long years. "She still...over the horrible accident...long years." 4...

    6 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 12/05/2010

  10. It was sort of intriguing in the beginning. It could have gone either way for me. It went downhill when you started with the rhetorical questions. There is no action going on here, it is mostly...

    2 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 19/05/2010

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