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  1. ...freedom from suffering; a state so deeply fulfilling that no objective experience can even come close. Thus commences our journey to absolute freedom, Nirvana. Or something like that...

    2 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 25/01/2011

  2. ...freedom from suffering; a state so deeply fulfilling that no objective experience can even come close. Thus commences our journey to absolute freedom, Nirvana. Overall, you did...

    10 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 25/01/2011

  3. ... so that the reader can visualize the scene and experience the emotion through the character. The woman gave a shrill shriek as a gushing sound commenced . - Consider a rewrite of this sentence -- The...

    4 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 05/03/2011

  4. ...begin to understand. The story begins to commence from Conrads life; he entered the merchant...thus, mirrors and evokes his own experiences and beliefs. You might be interested...

    2 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 03/12/2006

  5. ...’d downed one whole jug of that shit and commenced to gettin’ hot flashes Goose ... over me somethin’ I’d never experienced before It was like, like I ...

    2 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 29/10/2008

  6. I think it's very good. You used great imagery and people that are seeking inward happiness should really be drawn into the pages from the description you gave.

    2 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 24/01/2011

  7. ...what is available for you to write about based on your own life experience . For example, if you're an adolescent girl, then you'd better not write about middle aged couple commencing a sexual relationship which leads to the actualisation of their...

    2 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 19/05/2013

  8. I really like this. As far as your writing style goes, this is commendable. Personally, I'd do another draft, though, just to give it that last shiny coat of paint that it needs before going out into the world. Also, some people (guy above...

    4 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 25/01/2011

  9. Honestly, you are a great writer, but your style screams,"look, I am here to impress." I guess I prefer the not-to-over-the-top stuff, you know, just something that draws me in and wraps its fingers into...

    4 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 06/03/2014

  10. I think it's a REALLY good hook! :) i would read this book in a heart-beat! :) Good Job! Really. Amazing! :)

    6 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 26/01/2011

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