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  1. ...without the context of other sentences. You also commence a lot of sentences with 'She' or... and discovering it through your experience . Your subject matter and characters ...

    6 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 14/08/2010

  2. I like it so far -- I enjoyed your way of making the sentences flow, but I feel like there is a case of thesaurus abuse here.

    2 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 19/09/2010

  3. ...t a prologue either. That would be scene one again, commencing with action from part-way through the chronological storyline to..., read lots of good stuff so you have experience of what it is like. It takes time...

    5 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 10/08/2010

  4. .... She is 15, and World War I is commencing on the continent. Bookish, extremely intelligent, and proto-feminist, Mary...

    3 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 02/03/2010

  5. Some of the descriptions need to be removed. The number one problem with new writers (apart from bad grammar or amateurish writing style) is over-description. You blast too much detail in the reader's mind, and it turns them away...

    3 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 27/09/2009

  6. ...with in your first paragraph with the sentence commencing with “or” but not the one with “and.” 2.) First...of reconciling youth and vitality with wisdom and experience , I.e., an 18 year old who is really 100...

    3 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 04/08/2009

  7. These would be better, like minded people that are experienced in book reviewing. Welcome to Writing to Publish...

    1 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 30/07/2009

  8. ...isn't a memoir. A memoir is written by the author about experiences they had. Are you Private Ryan? Do you realize...

    1 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 12/02/2009

  9. ...'s like painting a picture, you can commence your work wherever you wish. Tell ... alterations before you can become experienced . A good way for her to improve her...

    5 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 03/01/2009

  10. ... mission to know them, they draw on past experiences and historical failures from the church in ... on the other for food as evil and wrong, and here commences the true story, I recommend you read it, very ...

    1 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 05/12/2008

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