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  1. I really like this. As far as your writing style goes, this is commendable. Personally, I'd do another draft, though, just to give it that last shiny coat of paint that it needs before going out into the world. Also, some people (guy above...

    4 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 25/01/2011

  2. I think it's very good. You used great imagery and people that are seeking inward happiness should really be drawn into the pages from the description you gave.

    2 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 24/01/2011

  3. ...freedom from suffering; a state so deeply fulfilling that no objective experience can even come close. Thus commences our journey to absolute freedom, Nirvana. Or something like that...

    2 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 25/01/2011

  4. ...freedom from suffering; a state so deeply fulfilling that no objective experience can even come close. Thus commences our journey to absolute freedom, Nirvana. Overall, you did...

    10 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 25/01/2011

  5. Overall, very well written. Only a few minor corrections, noted in [ ], comments noted in { } about < >: I did not join [the] cross country team five other runners, also <freshman>...

    3 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 15/12/2010

  6. Interesting.

    1 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 07/12/2010

  7. .... She is 15, and World War I is commencing on the continent. Bookish, extremely intelligent, and proto-feminist, Mary...

    6 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 21/11/2010

  8. ...if the arena has come to life in her living room. The experience is oddly surreal. She ceases to cry, laugh, plead with her...

    2 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 13/11/2010

  9. .... She is 15, and World War I is commencing on the continent. Bookish, extremely intelligent, and proto-feminist, Mary...

    6 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 22/09/2010

  10. ...39; is are subtle and obscure as the novel commences . You should know that this is, first... to achieve in the end. If you truly want to experience this book, than you should read it for yourself, because...

    2 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 11/09/2010

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