I can feel the grime on her soul, the salt welling in the eyes. A fine poem, Hydro
9 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 30/09/2008
It'as a couplet. that's two lines that rhyme
1 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 22/03/2010
You may want to post the poem when seeking help.
5 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 28/11/2011
A wonderful inspiration for your poem. Excellent!
2 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 01/12/2008
... you know, I'm gona sound like a broken record, but that was very very good, go get yourself a manager and make a million bucks...
16 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 13/11/2007
For just starting out, it's ok. You don't always have to rhyme. The best advise, let the words just flow out of you onto the paper. You can always go back and spell check after typing it in.
4 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 16/03/2008
first i think you mean "get me some" not my second... it is a poem. anything can be a poem. in my opinion it is not the best, i bet you can do better its misleading which is very humorous.
3 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 08/04/2010
I have never seen a comma used that way. Here are links for understanding how dashes can be used. http://www.google.com/search?q=punctuation+in+poems+with+dashes&ie=utf-8&oe=utf-8&rls=org.mozilla:en-US:official&client...
1 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 13/02/2008
Complete Edit: (Took a half-hour or so) She gave him a sad wave as she turned and walked away. Little did he realize that this was the last time they’d see each other again. Her was heart in pieces...
2 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 12/08/2008