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  1. This is really quite good! But, I dont see why there are so many people sending there books/short stories out on this site. You should try Worthy of Publishing. Yes, it's free & also copyrighted...

    4 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 08/09/2009

  2. well, you made all of this go by too fast. You need to put in a little more detail. Yes, we know that he's alone now, but how does he feel? Is his heart hurting? Does he feel helpless? Is he in a denial state? Look up grief. This may help you...

    3 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 21/07/2010

  3. ... for all of them: Stephen Cornfoot (R), Tracey Davis (female, S), Kevin Entwhistle (R), ...

    6 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 26/11/2011

  4. Anything about Salinger is good, so I'll pick Franny and Zooey. At that age I also liked pretty much Krakauer's Into the wild...well, Cold Mountain and Tom Sawyer...

    6 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 23/07/2009

  5. sally; nicola; rory; tash; kaitlyn; lily; issabelle; issy; zendaria; zen; aida; ariel; sydney; zahlee; zali; juliet; julianne; jaime; anna; bonnie; erin; kaylan; kayla; kaila; kireesha; kaveisha; alisha; alexia; taylor; hope you like them & just thought id add my name in there too :) xo

    12 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 25/08/2010

  6. ...refer to a female mule. Might be some comic lines in there somewhere?) Tracey Desdemona short form Des Natasha short form Tash...

    11 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 29/07/2011

  7. You have several run-on sentences that make it hard to read. Also, the writing is really random. While I understand you want to include details that give insight into your character's mind, but including everything he/she thinks...

    8 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 30/11/2009

  8. ...! The Hobbit! Angels and Demons by Dan Brown

    10 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 03/04/2009

  9. ..., Alisson, Jamie 3. Nicole, Simone, Tracey, Vanessa 4.Tara, Louise, Tori, Alyssa...

    7 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 30/07/2009

  10. maybe... add a little more description about the setting- like describe in depth the deep, echoing halls of the orphanage- or the small, wallpaper smothered ones. maybe describe Kristy's face- maybe a little bit creased from stress, but she had kindness in...

    6 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 04/03/2010

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