Only have an prologue if you think it will help the story. No story needs a prologue and most people tend to want to get straight into chapter one, instead of faffing about with prologues. But as I say, have it if you need it. Starting with the daily weather report. Tut-tut...
5 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 03/06/2011
... in any serious trouble…until the night he ends up in jail. Enter Sergeant Brown, a cop assigned to be Kevin's mentor. If Kevin...
3 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 07/05/2011
I like the basics you do need to work on details and develop it further though. I can imagine putting more emphasis to the character of Edward (being arrogant but kind at heart - or you can even reverse that!) and making up good conversations or use...
3 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 22/02/2011
I like Kailah
2 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 09/07/2010
Actually, I consider it quite well written.
6 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 07/07/2010
- related to Sgt. Brown