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... is a wonderful poem, I love it! Though, in this line, "swirl up calmly and place my head" did you mean to say "curl up calmly...

...in rather well-used words, "anoint", "roar", "ugly swirl" to paint and give color to your poem. Nice work. Keep it...

I like the way you manage to make it work, but I think with your potential you could write something a little more modern, maybe stick something about the world we live in, or something to make us realise what your life is like. You know, something like: Life...

... deep, north wing wrests, lingering leaves, dying swirls, and then the 2 lines that end this "Blown far from places...

You can borrow my makeup in my manly bag....its not a purse! Its European!

.......assonance The only things moving are swirls of snow............alliteration As I lift the mailbox door, I feel ...

... excited, bowing to the roaring storm, waving, swirling, tossing their branches in glorious enthusiasm like worship. ...

.... I love so many of the lines: Rainbow swirled bubbles <--- stunning Don’t let the malevolent...