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...window a refreshing shower to many Each distinct drop forms swirls of waves and foam on the riverside When it stops our...
5 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 13/03/2008
... is a wonderful poem, I love it! Though, in this line, "swirl up calmly and place my head" did you mean to say "curl up calmly...
5 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 16/06/2011
...in rather well-used words, "anoint", "roar", "ugly swirl" to paint and give color to your poem. Nice work. Keep it...
5 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 28/05/2011
I like the way you manage to make it work, but I think with your potential you could write something a little more modern, maybe stick something about the world we live in, or something to make us realise what your life is like. You know, something like: Life...
3 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 24/01/2011
... deep, north wing wrests, lingering leaves, dying swirls, and then the 2 lines that end this "Blown far from places...
9 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 24/11/2010
You can borrow my makeup in my manly bag....its not a purse! Its European!
4 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 02/07/2010
.......assonance The only things moving are swirls of snow............alliteration As I lift the mailbox door, I feel ...
2 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 01/05/2010
... excited, bowing to the roaring storm, waving, swirling, tossing their branches in glorious enthusiasm like worship. ...
1 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 30/08/2011
.... I love so many of the lines: Rainbow swirled bubbles <--- stunning Don’t let the malevolent...
4 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 13/07/2008
Wow if I had to rate, 15 out of 10 lol. I mean it's like really nice and the punctuations and just everything is perfect!
13 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 03/06/2011
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