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  1. ... end of the world!" In my imagination I vision the swirling black hole, a sparking vortex the rift through time and space, a paradigm of the...

    4 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 03/07/2008

  2. ... and focuses and minimalizes it just a bit more. swirl, buzz and squawk and grab don't seem to fit for me. I don't...

    9 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 04/07/2007

  3. ... poppity pop, One after another, when will they stop? Whirling, swirling the popcorn pops, In a bowl they quickly drop, Fluffy popcorn...

    5 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 20/05/2009

  4. ...poem. "with leaping grace Cat takes its place (a swirl of fur that magically transforms into one long sonorous infinite felinity of purrrrrr...

    11 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 09/02/2010

  5. ...way you have phrased the three items 'the sky, the cross, all nature swirls' reads as though the sky and the cross swirl and i'm not sure how a...

    5 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 24/06/2010

  6. ... child- hood. (again why the break on 'hood'?) The rest of this blur swirls in the room you have readied, unable to find the door (the door between reality...

    18 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 22/07/2009

  7. ... rhymes sound forced and very childish. The whole swirl swoosh and twirl bit also sounds childish. If you would make it sound more...

    4 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 22/12/2007

  8. Yes, I really think it has some meaning. The only thing I would suggest is to add the word "was" before the word "once" in the last stanza. It just would sound better. Other than that, very, very, good.

    2 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 20/05/2011

  9. Honestly? Not the best I`ve read. Not even close. Your grammar is terrible and the poem itself has no structure, meter, or anything. And I would prefer it to be in stanzas. Yes, the rules of poetry can be...

    4 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 06/02/2009

  10. ... Love affair at +100 mph over the limit.(~_^) Their love swirls amidst rising air, Two lovers dancing without a care...

    3 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 18/04/2012

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