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  1. ...with the superior dust-of-sleep. wields easily the pale club of the wind and swirled justly souls of flower strike the air in utterable coolness deeds of...

    4 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 27/05/2013

  2. I think that's really really good :D I'm lost for inspiration right now, and that sort of helped too Good job, it has a lot of raw emotion

    1 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 21/05/2013

  3. The poem is about a car hitting two dogs, one of which dies. And about how various people respond to the death/injury of the dogs. And about the deaths of humans. And about the importance of story and myth to the human race. And...

    2 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 31/05/2013

  4. ...critique. As you say a poet is an artist. As far as the use of swirling and thread- has the person ever watch the thread swirl from the spool on a ...

    15 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 12/05/2013

  5. Interesting read.. I'l share my views. Pros: Good vocabulary, good details of the scene,nice introduction of the stalker Cons: I felt that though the scene is intense, i lost my way halfway thro. Maybe make it a...

    3 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 31/05/2013

  6. way too long try to shorten it

    1 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 16/05/2013

  7. It's OK, but that is more the nature of sonnets, trying to force your feelings into a rather harsh and unforgiving format. That said, you did miss on the first rhyme, as 'chocolate' and 'taste' don't rhyme

    1 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 16/05/2013

  8. I like the use of plectrum, but I don't know about comined metaphoric use in this, you could really make 2 poems. Good style though. I enjoyed reading.

    1 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 14/05/2013

  9. Each line must have 10 syllables. No more, No less. "all those around it. Of the first bite," - 9 syllables "How much does the shore need to heal the broken?" - 11 syllables Also, it just...

    4 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 01/06/2013

  10. You're an awful poet, that's who you are.

    4 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 09/05/2013

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