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  1. The poem is an enjoyable read, but dogs can also be a metaphor for certain humans in this context.

    2 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 07/08/2013

  2. ...erase scars on my thighs Nor painful memories or swirling thoughts The past is history I can draw a positive future...

    5 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 06/08/2013

  3. As Experto has already observed, there is a natural four-line stanza running through most of this. The thought would be easier to follow if you broke it up into the verse paragraphs which are already (mostly) there...

    4 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 03/08/2013

  4. I advise that you broaden you vocabulary or use a thesaurus when you write. I liked this poem but I think that it lacks larger words. When I write I prefer to use sophisticated words and let people look up the meaning of...

    4 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 05/08/2013

  5. Omg that is really good for a 14 year old! Keep going some day you might become a poet! :)

    4 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 05/08/2013

  6. LittleTonyBigDaddy First, thank you for answering my poem. I can see why you said you liked it. Though a different type love and compassion here, there are similarities how we wrote the piece, in short, terse...

    1 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 03/08/2013

  7. set fireflies free sparking the summer night skies under meteor showers and light is alive our spirits set free

    1 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 24/07/2013

  8. Quite a story, more a parable perhaps in what it teaches. Liked how you built suspense with leaves turning colors at different times, exactly as they would in nature. Enjoyed.

    6 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 25/07/2013

  9. Blaze Mag-nif-a-seek. I loved the poem. Not sure of the title, only because I do not understand what Hems is here... like the hem of a skirt? Wait, in the first stanza, is that what you are doing, hemming a skirt...

    4 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 01/07/2013

  10. i think its pretty good, maybe add a line or two i it is for someone special about something tht you love to do with them. if it isnt for someone special, its great.

    3 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 03/07/2013

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