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  1. Grammatical error at third line: "its" instead of "it's." Other than that it's pretty good, I liked the twist at the end. I don't particularly like the "Imagine" part at the beginning though. I think it would...

    5 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 14/08/2013

  2. It's not a great work, but you're working on an idea. Have you read Jane Kenyon's poem Having it out with melancholy or Les Murray's poems in Killing the black dog? Good work for you to look at. What you want to...

    2 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 21/08/2013

  3. I would say your description fits perfectly just how quickly dreams can get lost, while we are saying "put it off a little while, I still have time". If you have a dream dont stop trying to make it possible! Not for a moment! They float away and...

    15 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 08/08/2013

  4. Its very good, did you write it? I would have tightened it up a little, its to SPACED OUT for me, but that's me. And the sunlight clasps the earth, And the moonbeams kiss the sea;-- What...

    1 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 09/08/2013

  5. The poem is an enjoyable read, but dogs can also be a metaphor for certain humans in this context.

    2 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 07/08/2013

  6. ...erase scars on my thighs Nor painful memories or swirling thoughts The past is history I can draw a positive future...

    5 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 06/08/2013

  7. As Experto has already observed, there is a natural four-line stanza running through most of this. The thought would be easier to follow if you broke it up into the verse paragraphs which are already (mostly) there...

    4 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 03/08/2013

  8. I advise that you broaden you vocabulary or use a thesaurus when you write. I liked this poem but I think that it lacks larger words. When I write I prefer to use sophisticated words and let people look up the meaning of...

    4 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 05/08/2013

  9. I thought that was pretty especially the part when you said "not a statistic":-) obviously you have a passion in writing so keep writing and improving and in no time you'll be as good as shakespeare:-)

    3 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 06/08/2013

  10. Omg that is really good for a 14 year old! Keep going some day you might become a poet! :)

    4 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 05/08/2013

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