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  1. ... cat, a cat with a distinctive coat of stripes, dots, or swirling patterns. The markings on cat-Minerva’s face resemble...

    2 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 08/04/2014

  2. It does seem to be a very well written passage, I assume though that it is a portion of a book rather an entire book otherwise you would have labeled it as a story. Anyways I believe that at times, it does get mildly confusing to determine between...

    1 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 01/02/2014

  3. I won't criticize your reasoning for the anatomy of your characters. I do believe that this story is interesting and could be taken to great lengths. I can sense that this story is not set in current...

    6 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 01/03/2014

  4. Yes I definitely would. The main character seemed interesting to me and it seemed like quite a brutal fight. It's got excellent action. Maybe you could've described how the demon looked a little at first and...

    2 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 25/01/2014

  5. I finished packing and Aiden took my bag out to the car. That old rusted Ford was the only thing I was able to keep [or did that refer to the bag? You need to be clearer on that point...

    6 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 18/01/2014

  6. It rode into a dark and stormy night.

    2 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 09/01/2014

  7. Hey! I don't want you to get the wrong idea so first of let me start of with….WOW! you're a really good writer! But let's just say that this is a very rough draft of your story and I am going to go by with what you said "...

    3 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 12/01/2014

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