It does seem to be a very well written passage, I assume though that it is a portion of a book rather an entire book otherwise you would have labeled it as a story. Anyways I believe that at times, it does get mildly confusing to determine between...
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1 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 18/01/2014
I finished packing and Aiden took my bag out to the car. That old rusted Ford was the only thing I was able to keep [or did that refer to the bag? You need to be clearer on that point...
6 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 18/01/2014
Good luck finding what you need.
2 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 14/01/2014
Hey! I don't want you to get the wrong idea so first of let me start of with….WOW! you're a really good writer! But let's just say that this is a very rough draft of your story and I am going to go by with what you said "...
3 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 12/01/2014