The meter of a poem can be "iambic pentameter" even if not every line goes exactly five-times-"da-DUM." Meter is a general, overall pattern, not a strict marching rhythm. Why is it so hard to figure out which syllables are...
1 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 22/09/2012
I am reminded of the phrase, it's the thought that counts. Material things at the end of the day, mean little. When we die, we take none of them with us. So what if the ring wasn't an expensive one. There is...
3 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 09/10/2013
Nice poem better than mine i think. You have a real talent for making your words seem as though they're actions. good job on the poem.
3 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 17/11/2011
Absolutely beautiful, that's an amazing poem, especially those last 4 lines "Im gone now baby theres nothing you can do except maybe, start living for YOU" there really emotional, even though your whole poem was.. those last for...
3 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 18/04/2010
I really like them, especially the first one.
2 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 14/05/2011
I read into your poem a talented but tormented young woman. I have a daughter like you, though she is little less than twice your age. She is in rehab now. Like you, she is an artist and quite talented. And like you, she, too, is self...
3 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 04/04/2013
that was almost like a song itself atleast to me :] i liked it ofcourse i am a fan of your poems how could i not be tis partly why i am your fan :D ah hearts go dreaming..
1 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 23/10/2009
Yes you did disappear for a while welcome back Just as sweet as ever! I can note the "Hallmark sounding"! :D btw for future reference I mostly enjoy reading your poems not really a critique :] thanks for...
1 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 28/01/2010
Blessings wow this is awesome, i like the words, the language the mood and the scene i could just vision this picture words you describe so nicely to your readers, i feel a sense of joy and peace you sure capture my imagination. I love this , good work keep it up.
4 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 14/12/2010