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  1. .... You'll know you've read enough when words start swirling around in your head in poetic ways. It's actually ...

    4 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 22/12/2013

  2. Your poem could do with a Title. You need to watch the Tenses you use, especially in this "back and forth" description of your former emotions and the conclusions you have now reached. There is the above point and also a logical issue...

    2 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 20/12/2013

  3. I think a last line might be "It feels alone." The strange thing about this poem is that it does not read like a poem; it reads like prose. Make the language a little less sentence-y and a little more like poetry. For example, the sentence "I think...

    2 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 12/11/2013

  4. Hello, i’m Brian. I have to tell you i do not like it, does that upset you? Well do not be because i loved it. Your syllable count from line to line is non existent, one has no need to count them the eyes of the reader tell all...

    2 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 02/11/2013

  5. Go to the poetry website poetica.com and post it there. You will get ample number of reviews and suggested changes.

    1 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 08/11/2013

  6. The following should help you:- By using connotation in poetry, a poet can create a specific mood, tone, or feeling simply by using the correct word or short phrase. Most poets consider word choice to be extremely important because, while two words can have the same...

    1 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 17/10/2013

  7. It`s a complex introduction - I would term that phrase `a figure of speech` as it fits imperfectly any definite device, imho. The closest could be a metaphor - at a stretch - as it incurs/ evokes a visual image/ images.

    2 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 12/10/2013

  8. You're getting there, but it needs a lot of editing etc. You are using far too many 'small' and unnecessary words, which impedes the flow. Here is a quick, small example, which still needs working on...

    1 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 22/09/2013

  9. marriage is between God and the couple the ceremony is for the parents to realize you ain't their baby anymore... when love is at its best.... he stayed with me through the bitchy, witchy, painful years... THAT...

    5 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 09/09/2013

  10. I think this is a very good poem. your phrasing Is Unique and I can tell English is not your native language. Without erasing your individuality work on the words that you use that people...

    2 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 16/09/2013

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