...; then someone Whispering echos on the walls and Swirls within me in a smoky bluish haze
2 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 17/11/2011
... I'm about to discuss. As they stand now they reflect the swirling emotional confrontation in a fragmented, dream-like way for this reader. At...
7 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 12/03/2013
Soundslike leaving the city to go hike in the mountains. I live in Denver and do this almost every weekend. Only a couple of small things...First four lines...perfect 5th line I would;d drop the word and...it throws off...
3 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 07/06/2008