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  1. You're starting the story with someone's musings. Better to start it with the character being more active. That will attract more interest. Zvi the Fiddler "Science fiction for people who...

    2 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 16/05/2013

  2. This sounds interesting! This almost has a "My girl" or "Beaches" type of vibe. IMO, I think the confession should come first. Why? It makes it more dramatic. Any good page...

    3 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 09/03/2013

  3. Very emotional& descriptive. A little too lovey for me. But a good crossing of paths of eternity& love.

    5 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 02/06/2011

  4. You are have a great plot. But your writing needs improvement. Yours: Then last period came. It was P.E. I’m a great runner. Everyone says I should join track and field, but...

    6 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 28/02/2009

  5. I think it would be interesting if some remained and some went back. Then you can compare the differences in the lives of those who stayed in the future and those who went back to the past. So the end of the book could have the...

    12 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 08/06/2011

  6. I actually thought of something like this a few months ago, when I remembered the intense effect one novel had on me (I cut my hair the night I finished it, and went into a small depression that lasted a week). My...

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