You're starting the story with someone's musings. Better to start it with the character being more active. That will attract more interest. Zvi the Fiddler http://www.barnesandnoble.com/c/zvi-zaks "Science fiction for people who...
2 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 16/05/2013
I think it would be interesting if some remained and some went back. Then you can compare the differences in the lives of those who stayed in the future and those who went back to the past. So the end of the book could have the...
12 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 08/06/2011
Very emotional& descriptive. A little too lovey for me. But a good crossing of paths of eternity& love.
5 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 02/06/2011