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Sheldon Thomas (Chapter 40)
1 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 10/09/2015
What idea? It's a genealogy.
1 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 31/01/2014
I realise this isn't what you asked for but maybe you should send this to another writer who knows what they're doing and ask for a beta read, maybe doing the same for them in return. Make sure they are honest with you. I sense this may help you...
3 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 13/01/2014
I think you should work on developing your characters a bit more before giving them superpowers. You should probably give faults that make them more realistic and force them to rely on another to get whatever they need...
1 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 27/06/2013