Yes... I have, What is a jib cord? Interesting write on the human conditions of dysfunction and marriage... or was it? I should read it again I suppose. IT could use some editing.
2 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 31/12/2009
...it is , don't = do not , doesn't = does not , and so on ) , but jibs like a frightened horse at unfamiliar ones . our Local...
13 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 15/08/2012
... to he said. I like the rhyming scheme too. Good jib and keel it up :) And thanks for answering mine btw!
5 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 10/09/2013
Listen, you are gonna have to figure it out on your own and learn how to lead us. That reminds me, we have that HD meeting at 8pm. You bringing pastries? Edit: Well, HD, we have to discuss...
9 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 26/05/2012
Your have a pleasing, languid rhythm throughout this poem. Very well constructed and presented. Short, beautiful poem, D.
7 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 20/07/2011
Initially, I feel that the rhymes hold you back, as it feels that in order to makes those rhymes works, something else was sacrificed, so the poem does not flow as well as it can. Also, the use of certain words (cacaphony...
2 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 10/06/2014
Whew! I am exhausted from reading that. It's quite a challenge, almost a tongue twister. It's poetry that really makes the reader have to pay attention. Very descriptive, very visual. I really felt like I was at the mercy...
2 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 03/03/2012