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  1. From what I've read, that is very detailed and good. Keep writing and see how it goes. But great so far ;)

    1 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 06/11/2012

  2. ... one thing, then a guy saying something, you put what the guy says in a new paragraph. 2. Capitalize names like Dad and Mom. 3. When you're starting a new quote, capitalize the first letter of the first word...

    3 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 06/11/2012

  3. ...wish there was more to read, It was very detailed, but not in a boring way. Some authors add to much detail, and the reader...

    5 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 31/10/2012

  4. ... Complex - Cathy E. Zaragoza*** • Green - Ted Dekker • The Compound - S. A...

    6 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 27/08/2012

  5. ...you should rephrase some of your sentences, like " around her green colured eyes was a smoky eye" and the " she didn't send a...

    3 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 16/08/2012

  6. Skylar - Victoria Justice Nico - Justin Bieber Summer - Abigail Breslin Katlyn - Miley Cyrus Dylan - Kenton Duty

    6 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 14/08/2012

  7. Paper Towns, John Green When You Reach Me, ... The Answer You're Looking for Is inside You, Mark...

    9 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 05/07/2012

  8. Yeah you're good. I think you had too much detail in some parts, but other than that great job!

    3 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 08/06/2012

  9. its a good start...work with the flow..you seem to be writing about three subjects at once.keep on doing what your doing then total proofread the final story.

    2 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 05/05/2012

  10. ...can kidnap neighbor sims and box them in so they can't escape (if you're into that) All the dorms should have...and you can set Slytherin's to green, etc. That's all I've...

    4 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 23/04/2012

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