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  1. It was going great and I was starting to like it...until you came to the lip ring part and I had to hold in my laugh and lunch. That was disgusting yet funny and not threatening like you wanted it to...

    6 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 06/02/2011

  2. Your right I do want to answer. I love this. Which I don't say much here. Your detail is so beautiful, I can picture it in my head. I know everyone says "OMG the was amazing!" but I mean it...

    7 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 22/01/2011

  3. It's good, but it grosses the crap out of me! Please don't explain in such detail about Jarret's lips unless you want to lose readers, buddy. Also, you don't have black blood. What you think is black blood, is actually blue...

    3 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 06/02/2011

  4. *Squishes answerer above with a fly swatter* Ew, pesky fly. *Dumps the fly into the toilet and flushes* I really enjoyed this piece of writing. Well done. :) However, like every piece of writing in the world, it...

    2 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 23/01/2011

  5. I'm going to be honest, I did not read the whole thing. It's really late. However, it does seem very interesting and well written from what I did read. Does sound sort of.. rushed. Keep at it, it's definatly worthy...

    15 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 24/08/2008

  6. I don't think it's too dramatic, especially depending on where its placed in the story (unless you're doing some sort of short story thing...?) If you think it's fine, then it is. If not, try and fix it. It's your opinion that really...

    3 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 03/07/2010

  7. it does makes me want to read more. and there are already questions in my head. Don't get me wrong, questions are good, they keep me wanting for more. but i can't figure out where is this heading. what's...

    2 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 23/02/2010

  8. The prologue was very well written, I thought. As for the first chapter, you went a little too far into detail with some things. It's okay to skim over some things (I.E., her getting...

    3 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 09/09/2009

  9. Oh, this is quite a piece! I would definitely say you have a talent with throwing words together! I am working on my own story but am too afraid to put it online. Anyways, this is great! I hope to hear...well read more soon...

    1 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 03/07/2009

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