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  1. *Squishes answerer above with a fly swatter* Ew, pesky fly. *Dumps the fly into the toilet and flushes* I really enjoyed this piece of writing. Well done. :) However, like every piece of writing in the world, it...

    2 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 23/01/2011

  2. I'm going to be honest, I did not read the whole thing. It's really late. However, it does seem very interesting and well written from what I did read. Does sound sort of.. rushed. Keep at it, it's definatly worthy...

    15 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 24/08/2008

  3. Hmm. So far as a rough outline of an idea this is not bad at all. If you look at some of the YA fiction that's out there today, this actually has more of a story line than a good deal of it. So far here's what I liked: The "save the world by unusual...

    3 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 05/03/2012

  4. I don't think it's too dramatic, especially depending on where its placed in the story (unless you're doing some sort of short story thing...?) If you think it's fine, then it is. If not, try and fix it. It's your opinion that really...

    3 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 03/07/2010

  5. it does makes me want to read more. and there are already questions in my head. Don't get me wrong, questions are good, they keep me wanting for more. but i can't figure out where is this heading. what's...

    2 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 23/02/2010

  6. The prologue was very well written, I thought. As for the first chapter, you went a little too far into detail with some things. It's okay to skim over some things (I.E., her getting...

    3 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 09/09/2009

  7. It would be difficult to direct you on where to go from here - that's something only you, as the author, can decide. Don't be afraid to get a few dozen pages into your story and find that you have to completely rewrite your beginning because of how the story's unfolded...

    4 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 02/01/2009

  8. Oh, this is quite a piece! I would definitely say you have a talent with throwing words together! I am working on my own story but am too afraid to put it online. Anyways, this is great! I hope to hear...well read more soon...

    1 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 03/07/2009

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