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  1. Nice concept. The viewpoint of both characters! Your writing has a nice easy flow that engages the reader. You have ALOT of potential. Which genre is this intended for?

    5 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 07/05/2010

  2. Yea I thought it was really good!! Keep writing and develop it more :)

    3 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 01/07/2010

  3. Being that this is the 1st part of your story I have read, I can't compare it to the other parts. But I will say that you have developed an excellent use of imagery, and I was really able to create a motion picture of what was...

    3 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 12/12/2009

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