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  1. ... and is xxx miles away from Dublin. Let me add a few anecdotes about... anything good in their lives. Oh, wait? He did? This world is...

    5 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 19/05/2016

  2. I love your story. Doesn't have any grammar mistakes or anything. Perfect. I would go with the name that was suggested earlier. It's a perfect title :)

    3 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 05/05/2012

  3. ... you sent a queery letter about getting cooked in Dublin and they wanted your man-who-clipped you first, which...

    4 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 16/03/2008

  4. ... this stuff - draw a picture of Gregor Samsa, draw a map of Dublin to study Ulysses - and it never helps one 'get' the book, at...

    3 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 06/04/2009

  5. ... your writing samples to publishers etc. Oh and I think that this is a good story, except that Dillon would...

    13 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 17/02/2009

  6. Well written. Solid introduction. Structured presentation and focused sentences; clear exposition and evocative imagery.

    1 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 15/03/2010

  7. In the first sentence, knew should be new. Try not to repeat the word 'drunk' so much. When the dad is talking, it should be 'really you're too...' The last sentence makes it sound like he is leaving some place...

    4 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 19/12/2009

  8. The story has no plot. The characters need to be developed so that we (the readers) can feel what they're feeling. Your paragraphs are too long and will not hold the reader's interest. You need to change...

    6 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 13/04/2009

  9. I think this can be a good, book, it just needs some work. I had a lot of questions at the end of the passage such as: What was the "Rising"? Why is the "struggle" unwinnable? And where does the main character live...

    1 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 13/06/2011

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