Well written. Solid introduction. Structured presentation and focused sentences; clear exposition and evocative imagery.
1 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 15/03/2010
The story has no plot. The characters need to be developed so that we (the readers) can feel what they're feeling. Your paragraphs are too long and will not hold the reader's interest. You need to change...
6 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 13/04/2009
A Cup of Ireland
11 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 17/02/2010
I think this can be a good, book, it just needs some work. I had a lot of questions at the end of the passage such as: What was the "Rising"? Why is the "struggle" unwinnable? And where does the main character live...
1 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 13/06/2011
... when you finish the book. More books are waiting. Oh & another fact is, adult books can be finished in shorter...
3 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 28/10/2013
..., but how the boy sees that street in Dublin. The same object observed from different ... revived; for example, he doesn't say "oh, I was in love with the girl, that's why...
3 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 10/02/2010
- related to Dublin, OH