I think you've missed the point of the exercise. This isn't first person writing at all. This isn't you being a character, this is a standard essay about someone. If you have to "be" the character, then you can't say "Louisa...
4 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 22/03/2009
... is flowers in the attic. V.C. Andrews comes up with some sick ...secret from his mother. Her butler, John Amos, also seems to befriend Bart, but soon ...
2 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 18/09/2009
.... Careful or you may wind up in my next novel. Pax - C
3 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 04/01/2008