2 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 03/12/2012
It was okay, about average for the standards on this site, I don't think anybody will stick with this longer enough for your novel to finish. It's not a chapter but a page. You tell and don't show, there's not really any hook that engaging enough...
4 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 03/11/2012
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2 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 21/10/2012