you have talent for writing! i think it is wonderful the way it is ^.^
2 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 13/02/2010
None that I came across from 'famous' poets. According to one source your rhyme scheme is called: Monorhyme: "aaaaa...", an identical rhyme on every line, common in Latin and Arabic You might try...
2 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 10/11/2009
...rhyme, please don't use rhymed couplets...use an ABCB or AABA rhyme pattern so it breaks up the rhyme a bit. That should get ...
1 Answers · Arts & Humanities · 05/10/2009